“ What you wrote was actually very reasonable. But, what about this?
what if you were to create a awesome title? I am not suggesting your information is not solid., but what if you added
something that makes people want more? I mean De Jeugd mag een tumor krijgen, wat een kankerproductie zeg is a little boring.
You might glance at Yahoo's front page and watch how they create article headlines to grab viewers interested.
You might add a related video or a picture or two to get people
interested about what you've written. In my opinion, it could make your website a little bit more interesting. ”