“ Everything said made a great deal of sense.
However, consider this, suppose you added a little content?
I ain't saying your information is not good, but suppose you added something
that makes people desire more? I mean The Avett Brothers Give Brooklyn is kinda boring.
You might peek at Yahoo's home page and watch how they create news headlines to get people interested.
You might try adding a video or a related picture or two to grab readers interested about what you've written. In my opinion, it could make your website a little livelier. ”